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Life In LA, Part X

 
Title:  Life In LA, Part X
Author: Brokaholic
Rating: R/NC-17
Pairing: Jake/Heath/OC
Warnings: This story includes OC/ Dr. Adrian.
Disclaimer: These characters are fictional. They are my creations based on the real life characters of Jake, Heath and Adrian. Nothing in this story actually happened and it is not my intention to slander or speculate. This fiction was created entirely for amusement and there is no financial gain.
Summary: The morning after.
Notes: This chapter is dedicated to my friend Martin.

I'd also like to thank amtamburo and 69moons for pushing me to update this. I got side tracked by RL and other fics, but, it has been a pleasure rediscovering the fun of writing RPS.

Jake stirred in his sleep, stretching out in search of the warmth that had been wrapped around him all night. He found himself alone in bed, the silk sheets cold on the other side of the bed. What the fuck. He propped himself on up on his left elbow and rubbed his sleepy eyes with his other hand. Wondering whether the events vivid in his memory were simply a figment of his imagination or worse yet they were real but hadn’t meant jack to Adrian. ‘Fuck em and leave em’ was common practice in the gay world. He had watched the Logo channel enough times to know that. But damn, he had been expecting Adrian to be…before he could finish his train of thought; Adrian steped out of the bathroom, fully clothed, white lab coat in hand, stethoscope around his neck. 

“Good morning Jake.” He walked over and planted a kiss on Jake’s lips. It was like they had been lovers forever and woke up like this every morning. “I was debating waking you. Didn’t want to leave without a morning kiss, but, you looked so peaceful.”

“I was hoping for more than just a good morning kiss.” Jake was relieved Adrian had stayed after all, maybe it had been more than a simple fuck for him.

“I got to go to work, Jake. It’s Thursday. My Morning rounds begin at 7:30am.”

“What time is it?”

“It’s 6:30 in the morning.”

“Wow, you are running on less than 3 hours of sleep and still you look so fresh, how do you do it?”

“Practice” Adrian smiled just as Jake pulled him into a kiss, meant to remind them both of what they had shared just a few hours ago.

“I feel like throwing a childish tantrum right now.” Jake slid his hands down to the growing bulge in Adrian’s slacks cupping his hardness in the palm of his hand enjoying the tortured look on Adrian’s face. He rubbed until he could feel the drops of precum soaking through the thin material. He waited for the moan from Adrian that marked the surrender of his body over to Jake’s complete control.

“Jake. Please. Jaakee. You. Are. Determined. To. Kill. Me” Adrian said between gasps as Jake worked him, rubbing all the right places.
 
“Oh. No. Adrian, I am determined to make sure you are thinking of me all day.” Jake’s lips curled up into a smile. He liked the way Adrian’s cock responded to him, like he not Adrian was its master. He slipped his hand into the slacks and groped through the undergarments until he felt the strained skin of the thick member. Jake wrapped his fingers around the girth. It wasn’t the most comfortable grip but it was just enough to get the reaction he needed. He began moving his fist clenched around Adrian’s cock in an upward stroke, his thumb smearing the drops of precum on the tip.

“Jake. Jake?” Adrian was lost. Jake figured he was probably debating whether to move away from his grip or to stay and savor it.

“You should have woken me. Who knows we might have even had time for a quickie.” Jake still has that smug look plastered on his face. 

“Oh, Fuck Jake. You had better stop.”

“Why? Don’t you like it?” Jake could not resist a smirk.

“You know why. You little devil. How would I explain cum stain on my pants?” 

Jake leaned forward, bringing his lips right next to Adrian’s ear and in a voice as low and sexy as he could manage, knowing it’d drive Adrian to the brink of self-control said, “What if I swallow? Then there’d be none.” 

Jake was stunned when Adrian reached for his hands, yanking them out of his pants.  That had not been quite the reaction he had been hoping for. 

He watched as Adrian walked over to the table and placed down the stethoscope that had been dangling around his neck. He saw Adrian reach for his suitcase and fumbled around in search of something. Jake turned away and shut his eyes as he cursed Adrian’s iron clad control. He couldn’t trust his voice enough to make any flippant or witty comment so he concentrated on deep breaths realizing how wound up he had gotten stroking Adrian.

When he opened his eye again, Adrian was standing in front of him, peeling his clothes off and tossing them on the chair behind him. Jake watched mesmerized as he noticed the lubed condom in his hand. Adrian stepped out of the slacks bending over slightly to get his legs untangled from the clothing. When finally he stood tall and naked, Jake took in a sharp breath.

“That quickie you were talking about. I am intending on collecting.”

Jake could only smile at that, a triumphant smile. Adrian’s self control was no match for Jake.

Adrian crossed the few feet between them and pulled the covers off Jake, exposing his nakedness to the cool air-conditioned draft in the room. Jake starred up at Adrian feeling completely bare on the inside and out. Like Adrian’s gaze could see into his soul. But then he caught sight of the dark shade of desire clouding Adrian’s gaze and he was lost in the lust that consumed them both. He wanted Adrian inside him, filling him and he wanted it fast.
He lay flat on his back and lifted his knees off the bed, dragging his feet on the bed until they almost touched his butt cheeks. He meant it as an invitation and a provocation. The groan that escaped Adrian told Jake, he didn’t miss the message.
 
 Adrian bent over, hovering over Jake for a moment before crushing his lips against Jake’s. Jake savored the taste of wanton abandon, drinking in all he could of this man. He moaned when he felt Adrian trail his fingers across this chest, over his abdomen, stopping to play with the silky hairs that swirled around his belly button. After what seemed like eternity, but was only a few moments, Jake felt Adrian slid a finger along the underside of his cock.
He didn’t like that he was such an easy lay, but there was nothing he could do to stop his cock from twitching in response to the gentle teasing it was receiving.  Those inches down there had a mind of their own, and, right now, they were asking for more; begging for more.

There was no time for teasing and prepping, Jake knew he had already teased Adrian to within an inch of coming in his pants. 

“I want you, now!” Jake said, starring straight into Adrian’s eyes, giving him the go-ahead to go for it. Letting him know, it was what he craved.

Adrian didn’t need another nudge. He settled in the space between Jake’s spread legs kneeling on the bed.  Jake raised his head off the bed, trying to catch a glimpse of Adrian as he slipped the lubed condom on with one hand. He felt Adrian’s other hand, rubbing the rim of his puckered hole, teasing him with a promise of what was to come.
Adrian grabbed Jake’s legs, pushing them back so his thighs rested on his tummy, his butt high in the air, exposing the tight ring so Adrian could place the tip of his cock at the rose bud in front of him. “Jake, man, I am too far gone to slow down now.”

“Don’t. You Dare. Stop.” Jake’s plea was frantic, his needs strong; the need to be filled even if just for a short time, the need to find release, the need to prove last night had not been a hoax.
 
He tugged at Adrian. Hoping he wouldn’t make him have to beg.
Adrian pushed in, not wanting to be too rough on Jake after his first time last night. He went in slowly letting Jake stretch to accommodate him before diving in deeper. He touched that sensitive bud and felt Jake buck.
Jake loved this angle, he could feel the skin around his balls tightening every time Adrian would ram into him brushing that place inside him Jake had just recently discovered held the key to the best of pleasures. Yes it was good. It was so. Fucking. Good. “Fuck Adrian, that feels good.”

“Jake, man. You are so tight and warm around me. I don’t think I can last too long.” With that Adrian, reached for Jake’s cock and matched the rhythm of his strokes to the thrusts. Going slow as he ground his hips into Jake and then faster when the moaning and groaning got louder, until Jake spilt his cum into his hands. The spastic clenching of the tight ring at the base of his cock sending Adrian spiraling into his own orgasm.

Jake looked at the clock on the wall still breathing hard; 6:55am. “Shit, Adrian. You’ll be late.” He tried to push a spent Adrian off him.

“Yeah, now you care. Like you didn’t know what you were so gleefully inciting.” Jake could feel Adrian’s hot breath as he half mumbled to himself.

‘For a second there, I though your considerable self control would kick in.”

“Should a, but, after last night I don’t think I can ever depend on it again.” Adrian toyed with Jake’s nipple then dragged himself away. Sitting up first to gather his composure and then picking up his discarded clothes. Jake let his gaze follow him as he walked into the bathroom to clean up and get dressed.

Alone again Jake pulled the covers over himself and crossed his hands behind his head. Stretching out fully on the bed, he inhaled the scent of their lovemaking and a satisfied smile played on his lips.

Adrian came back fully dressed, except this time he didn’t set down his suitcase when he came to kiss Jake goodbye, wielding the leather box as a shield to protect him from magnetic field around Jake that called to him.
“Jake, man, I wish I could stay in bed with you all day, but, I have patients to see.”

“I understand, I’ll see you later. Tonight, maybe?” Jake inquired hoping he didn’t sound too desperate.

“I can’t. I am on call all night, but, I can surprise you by showing up at your place on Saturday.”

Jake wanted to ask, ‘what of Friday’. He didn’t like having to schedule meeting Adrian again by searching through the calendar for an open slot. He hadn’t liked it before but after last night it was even harder to deal with.

 “Saturday sounds fine.” He finally said, hoping the bitterness in his voice did not show, wishing he had the strength to be spiteful and tell Adrian he didn’t have time on Saturday.  He knew he was being unreasonable, knew Adrian had a life that did not, and could not, revolve around him. But, knowing he was going to cancel whatever he had planned on Saturday so he could be with Adrian he couldn’t shake the feeling of resentment. It wasn’t Adrian he resented, but himself, for wanting Adrian so bad, he would re-arrange his life to make time for him. That wasn’t true, he resented Adrian too, for being able to separate him from the rest of his life and keep his priorities straight.
 
“See you later, Gylly.”  Adrian leaned in for a last kiss before reluctantly heading for the door. “And about the room, you can stay and relax for as long as you like. Just hand them the keys on your way out. I got it covered.”

“Thanks, Adrian. I will.”

Adrian shut the door behind him and Jake buried his head in the pillows. He caught the scent of Adrian, mingling with his own, and he forgot all about ‘next times’ and resentments. He hugged the pillow to himself until his exhaustion caught up with him and sleep found him.

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Jake had a photoshoot scheduled mid-day Thursday. He got there just a tad bit late, it wasn’t his style but the crew were used to the Hollywood celebs having no consideration for them. Jake was usually very punctual, but this once his let himself enjoy one of the perks of his fame.

Jake loved photo sessions. There was a love affair between him and the camera. He’d pose looking sexy both beckoning his lover and offering a feast to the eyes. And the camera would capture it demanding more with every click. He could argue he nailed the shots much better today because for the first time ever he had a person to envision in place of the camera, Adrian.

Finally he understood why the media had always been on his case about his photo shots looked homoerotic. It had always been a man he was posing for. The camera had always been male to him regardless of the sex of the photographer. 

After a long session, tired but also horny as hell, he walked towards the showers to wash off the oil they had used to make his skin glisten. He stopped at the dressing room where he had stowed his personal belongings before the shoot and out of habit checked his messages. 

He had 58 missed calls. 15 voice messages.
Mostly from folk calling to congratulate him on his MTV award. E skipped those. He’d have someone send them thank you notes later.
One from Justin early this morning, he rolled his eyes.
Two from his publicist reminding him of the photo shoot, more eye rolling. 
One from his mum, and he made a mental note to return her call. They hadn’t spoken in a while. 

One from Maggie saying she wanted to meet up for dinner if he was free. He was and it was a date. He knew he would have to make an extra effort to keep his sister from figuring out his current elated mood and grill him about it. He wanted to keep Adrian all to him self for a while. Finally he decided it would be worth the exertion anyway, he needed to keep occupied.

One from Michelle calling to see what time he’d be getting to NY next week. He hadn’t thought of going up a few days earlier. He had better check his schedule and see if he could make it for Wednesday. He missed the fast paced city.

Three Missed calls from Adrian and a text message; Last night was something. But, you didn’t get to swallow after all. You owe me ;). I plan on collecting on Saturday.

Jake could feel the blood rush into his cheeks as he blushed. He thought of calling him back but checked the time. He had already spent 20mins going through his calls. There was barely time for a shower and the trip to West Hollywood to meet Maggie. He sent her a text. *Pick u up @8 4 dinner.* and then settled for a text to Adrian; *U drive a hard bargain. And yes, last night was something. CU Saturday.*

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Friday went by and Jake still hadn’t talked to Adrian. They had played hide and seek on the phone all day. Jake swore he’d smash something against the wall if he got the damn answering machine one more time. So he stopped calling. He’d always get back from a meeting or somewhere and notice a voice mail from Adrian too, so he knew the frustration was mutual. 

He had found other things to keep his mind from drifting to Adrian, and the vivid reminiscence of their lovemaking. He liked how he could give free rein to every ounce of his passion, no need to be fearful of being too forceful. The sensation of begin filled and stretched by another man’s dick unlike anything he had ever imagined. He chided himself, for having denied himself these mundane pleasures, not knowing why he had never let himself be more aware of his innermost desires. 

He was still lost when the doorbell alerted him to the fact that he had company.  Jake’s heart skipped several beats because he knew there was only one person he was expecting today.

He made his way to the foyer glad he had given everyone the day off. Today was going to be all about him and his new found carnal craving for the doc.

Jake took a deep breath and opened the door to find Adrian leaning against the sculpted marble pillar that adorned the entrance.  

“Hey!” Jake flashed the doc his brightest smile. 

Adrian held out a bottle of wine in one hand and a large dish on the other. “Hello Gylly, I though we might get hungry at some point.”

“Smells good. What is it?”

“A cauliflower casserole.”

“Yummy. Vegan?”

“Yes actually. No eggs.”

“Good, I’ll put this away. We could have ordered in you know?”

“Yes Gylly. I Know. But I wanted to bring something.”

Jake led the way into the kitchen and offered Adrian a seat at the mini bar before attending to putting away the food.
“What would you like to drink?’

“It’s too early in the day for a drink, for me, anyways. A glass of Perrier would be fine.” Adrian said, eyes darting around looking for something, someone. 

“Are you looking for something?”

“I was wondering if there was anyone around.”

Jake smiled, “Na, everyone has the day off.”
Jake grabbed a bottle of Perrier from the fridge and shut the door. He turned around to find Adrian behind him. He was about to open his mouth to talk but he caught the look in Adrian’s eye and felt Adrian taking the bottle form him, placing it on the counter, before pulling him into a kiss.

Jake circled Adrian with his arms, grabbing at the muscles that lined his back. He let out a moan when Adrian ground against him. The hardness pressing up against his thigh letting him know just how happy Adrian was to see him.

“I have been dying. To do. This. Since. Thursday.” Adrian murmured in-between kisses.

Finally Jake broke the embrace. “Oh yeah, I would have thought you’d be too busy with your noble calling.”

“Well whatever parts of my brain, and my body.” Pause, “especially my body, that weren’t trying to save the world, were thinking about you. And for the most part, they were very hard too.” Adrian’s voice was like a sexy drawl, every word meant only to inflame the senses.

“You had better change the message on your answering service. I’m sick of listening to the one you’ve got now.” Jake turned around to reach for the Perrier and open a cabinet to grab some glasses.

Adrian smiled, stepping to the side so Jake could move around. “Yeah, our timing sucked.”

Jake poured the sparkling water into the glasses and handed one to Adrian, then gave in to his naughty streak, “Well at least our timing is on the mark in the more fiery moments.” He winked at Adrian and relished the smile that formed on his lips.

“So what were you planning for today?”

“I was just going for a splash in the pool.”

“Splash?”

“Yeah, that’s what me and Maggie call lazing in the pool for fun without actually swimming.”

“I see. And, what exactly does this lazing entail?” Adrian tapped his fingers lightly on Jake’s arm.

“That would be negotiable.” Jake walked over to a cabinet next to the sliding doors that lead out to the pool. “I have some, um, spare swim attire.”

“I was thinking of skipping the swim attire entirely.”

“Well, having it on, is just for the pleasure of taking it off later.”

“Ok, Skimpy briefs or lose shorts?” Adrian already knew the answer to that, but he wanted to hear it from Jake.
 
“Ha, shorts of course. I want to have easy access in the mean time.”

Half an hour later they were sprawled out under the sun, dripping wet from a short foray into the pool. They lay side by side, bodies touching just enough to be tormenting, knowing that they had the entire day to take it slow and easy.
“Man, I could lay here for eternity.” Adrian said, running the back of his hand against Jake’s temple.

“I would hope you would do more than simply lay there for all eternity.”  Jake teased.

“You want me to show you how much I’d too?”

“Only, if you can catch me?” With that, Jake hurried unto his feet and dashed into the pool. 

The splash with which Jake hit the water was only superseded by the splash with which Adrian followed him in. 
Jake tried to swim away, but, Adrian got the chance to show off what his painstakingly built shoulders were capable of. He caught Jake and pulled him under, only letting him up to crush their lips together. After the kiss, Jake couldn’t tell which had left him more breathless. 

Locked in each others arms, legs intertwined, Jake rested his head against Adrian, inhaling the musky smell of him.

Adrian ran his hand through the thick dark strands of hair that were now plastered to Jake’s face and head. “Gylly, I have to go for a Medical conference next week, in New York. I’d like for you to go with me.”

“I can’t”

“Oh,” 
Jake could hear the disappointment in Adrian’s voice strong as the aroma of turkish coffee.

“I can’t go with you, because, I will be in New York. I’d like to show you around if you'd have time though.”

“Somehow, I doubt I’d want to leave the hotel if I have you there.”

“Well, you had better plan on it. It’s Matilda’s baptism and I’m godfather. Michelle said to bring someone, so you can come.”

“I don’t think, when she said bring someone, she was thinking along those lines.”

“It doesn’t matter. Lover, friend of mine I bumped into, who cares. Say you’ll go with me.”

“If it’ll make you happy, I am sure *we* can make that happen,” Adrian was starring down at his cock.

Jake took a jab at him. “I see you always consult him before making major decisions.”

“Of course,” Adrian smiled.

“Speaking of him, did you know I can hold my breath for huge periods of time?”

“And?”

“Well, I was planning on delivering on my promise.”

“Promise?” Adrian arched his eyebrows.

“To swallow.”  Jake felt Adrian’s quick intake of breath. He slid deeper into the pool, first freeing Adrian’s already hardening cock from its confines and then taking a deep breath he plunged under the water.
Jake wrapped his lips around Adrian’s cock and felt it swell to full mast. He moved his lips back and forth, knowing the alternating warm lips and cool water would wreck havoc on Adrian’s senses. 

He couldn’t go down quite the full length, so he wrapped his fingers around the base. Continuing the strokes further up whenever he would need to come up for air. He wished more than anything he could see Adrian, but, he had to be satisfied with the infrequent glimpses of the ecstasy on Adrian’s face whenever he surfaced to replenish his lungs. 

Jake heard Adrian's moans and groans as muffled sounds through the water and so the only telling sign of the impending orgasm were his abdominal muscles clenched tight in anticipation of release. When Adrian finally came, he came hard and long, Jake thought it was the most beautiful thing he'd ever seen. He almost let a shot or two loose into the water curious to see just how well they would mingle, but, he remembered his pledge to swallow so he lapped up every drop.

When he came up, it took him a minute to catch his breath. Adrian was also gasping for air, inhaling each breath like he needed to survive. 

Out of the corner of his eyes, Jake caught sight of some movement. He couldn’t think who it could be, cos his staff was out and the door was locked. Unless, fuck. It was someone who had the keys to his place. Maggie.

Sure enough standing right next to the sliding doors that lead out to the poor were Austin and Peter.

From the look on Austin’s face there was no pretending they hadn’t noticed what was going on.

Adrian noticed the shocked expression on Jake’s face and turned around.

The moment Austin recognized Adrian was evident. The jealous look that spat daggers merged with the pained look of lost dreams. Austin turned around and ran out of sight, leaving a bewildered Peter starring from man, to man, to man.

Comments

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amtamburo
Sep. 13th, 2006 03:17 am (UTC)
:) Thank you so much for the update!! Another wonderful chapter!

EEK!! How embarrassing that Peter and Austin walked in and witnessed Jake making good on his promise, but maybe now Austin will see that it is useless and move on. (Though I have to say, getting over Jake would not be an easy... if not impossible... thing to do!)

Hope things are alright with you now. Looking forward to the next chapter.
brokaholic
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:00 pm (UTC)
Thanks dear. Thanks for pushing me to write and post this. Thanks for your kind words in my darkest hours. Thanks for the pleasure of your friendship. Thanks for your continous support.

Hugs from a brokaholic friend
amtamburo
Sep. 25th, 2006 11:35 pm (UTC)
You are most welcome... now... am I going to have to push you for the next chapter...hmmm? ~nudge~ ;p

(you of course know that I am kidding... just love this story so much! But seriously, I do hope that things are going well for you and that you are feeling a bit better. Please let me know how you are doing.)

(Anonymous)
Sep. 13th, 2006 03:37 am (UTC)
Three words - OH MY GOD!

I can't even think of words to type right now because I'm so blown away by this story! In the same words I think that Jake would say to Doc Adrian, "more please!!"

Shari_luv
brokaholic
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:04 pm (UTC)
I am glad you liked it. I am getting more comfortable writing sex scenes it seems. Now I can't figure why I thought it soo difficult. lol

I am blown away by Jake, and Adrian ;) so I am glad the story has the same effect.

Thanks for commenting.
bbmgirlfan
Sep. 13th, 2006 07:16 am (UTC)
Wow, Alice, that was quite wonderful!

Very hot!!
brokaholic
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:12 pm (UTC)
Jeanine! Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting.

If you think it was hot then I can fix myself a glass of margarita and relax for the day;) (before getting to writing the next chapter of course)

george66
Sep. 13th, 2006 01:08 pm (UTC)
Well its about DAMN time!!!!
Do you have any idea how loooooonnnnngggggg its been sense I have been needing my Adrian fix??? Its like a drug!!! Bless Amtamburo and 69moons for keeping the pressure on you!! DON'T YOU EVER LET US GO THIS LONG AGAIN!!! (winking eye laughing)

Ah our good doctor was glorious in this chapter!! Hmmhmm!! He sexed up Jake REAL GOOD!!! Its not surprising that Jake felt lonely and selfish! Who in the hell won't want to keep Dr. Adrian in bed all day!!

Look the desciption about the photoshoots!! Because there is something always homoexotic about Jake Gyllenhaal pictures - always!!

The sex was sizzlingly hot and the playful interplay between Jake and Adrian is fun, sexy and natural. They are really developing into a wonderful relationship. But problems are on the horizon. Frist Austin and Peter but more importantly and more interesting Jake taking Adrian to Matilda's baptism!! Going to be very interesting to see how Heath is going to react!!

Well too damn bad, he had his chance!!! (laughing)

GEORGE

PS: I'm also waiting for my vampire Ennis. The man has been without sex for over a hundred years. Its time for the man to get fed! (snickering)
(Anonymous)
Sep. 13th, 2006 03:08 pm (UTC)
Re: Well its about DAMN time!!!!
PS: I'm also waiting for my vampire Ennis. The man has been without sex for over a hundred years. Its time for the man to get fed! (snickering)


What he said.
brokaholic
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:22 pm (UTC)
Re: Well its about DAMN time!!!!
George, your enthusiasm is always inspiring and I must say contagious.

I couldn't resist sliding in the bit about the photo shoot. I think like you do that there probably isn't anyone that looks more homoerotic than JG in pics, and this was long before BBM. He always looks like he is coming on to the camera. I have always had this mental image of him imaging the camera was his lover or something.

Honestly this chapter was mostly about developing their rapport, and raising the various plotlines for the story, one with Austin, Adrian's job vs Jake's lifestyle and ofcourse meeting Heath in NY.

Honestly the next chapter needs to be sooo long to contain all the stuff that I have for it. But, it'll be fun to write.

Your Vampire Ennis is on it's way. I am trying to be ambitious and update all my 3 fics this week. I also want to get the next chapter of Life in LA out by the weekend cos I am so damn into the whole Jake, Adrian plotline again. So we'll see. ;)
mondavi2000
Sep. 13th, 2006 01:23 pm (UTC)
Great Chapter!
Wow, that was extremely hot, I loved it. I like the playfulness between Jake and Adrian. Very natural and fun to read. I am really interested to see what happens next now that Austin has literally seen it with his own eyes. Hoping for an update soon!

Hugs dear!

Holly
brokaholic
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:24 pm (UTC)
Re: Great Chapter!
Holly, Thanks for all your support! This story wouldn't be half as fun to write if I couldn't share it with other RPS fans like you. To have your nod of approval means a big deal to me, especially cos you are arguably one of the top RPS writers there are.

((((Hugs))))
mondavi2000
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:28 pm (UTC)
Re: Great Chapter!
You are too much!! Thank you for the compliment back, you are such a sweetie.
thelastaerie
Sep. 13th, 2006 03:34 pm (UTC)
wow.. Alice. I need a fan again. That's damn sizzling HOT.

why does Jake always give keys to people? and why don't they have sex in bedroom like, us, normal folks? LOL, instead of a sexy pool? :-P

Poor Austin. His dreams dashed....

Eve
brokaholic
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:41 pm (UTC)
Eve, you left me in a laughing fit with your comment.

Yeah, Jake giving keys to people. Well to Maggie and implicitly to Pete.

I must say sexy pool does have its appeal. Oh and btw BJ in the pool; totally possible. Incase you were wondering, but, don't you dare ask me how I know! :)

Poor Austin. I Wanted Jake to have some other masculine attention. So, Jake liked Heath, Austin liked Jake and Adrian kinda throws everyone off balance.

Yup, I am evil like that. lol

HUgs!
(Anonymous)
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:30 pm (UTC)
Sexy's Back!
Maybe when Jakey noticed Justin's phone message, maybe Justin was just calling to let him know that Doctor Adrian is bringing sexy back! Now we know what their song really is! lol I love this fiction, please keep it cumming, or, erm, sorry, coming! JenJay, U.K.
brokaholic
Sep. 13th, 2006 04:43 pm (UTC)
Re: Sexy's Back!
Hi Jenjay.

I'm glad you liked it, and I am even more moved you took the time to let me know you did.

I will keep them cumming, um, coming ;)


Thanks. Alice
69moons
Sep. 14th, 2006 12:52 am (UTC)
I love this fic!!!
Not sure if I've fallen for your Adrian or it's just that I'd give anything to be in his skin......wait...could be both?

Adrian getting naked instead of leaving, showing up on Friday instead of Saturday, asking Jake to go to NY...hope Jake knows by now that A is all for him!

Thanks so much for the update!
brokaholic
Sep. 14th, 2006 03:12 am (UTC)
Thanks for pushing me to update this. I appreciate your kind words more than you know.

Yeah, I like Adrian too. Maybe, a bit too much.lol But, I think for sure I write him with some me in there too. *rolls eyes*

I wouldn't give Adrian points for getting naked. I mean honestly, for Jake, who wouldn't? lol

On friday the played hide and seek with the phone. Adrian showed up on saturday. I'd give Jake points for making sure the house was empty but that was more for his sake than Adrian's. I mean alot of the tabloids get thier stories from the "femme d'menage". Granted they would have had to take things to the bedroom, but even that is damning enough information.

Yeah, Adrian is into Jake, big time! And, the invitation was mostly cos he didn't want to go for entire wednesday-sunday stretch without seeing him.

Mostly, Jake is enjoying discovering his sexuality and Adrian is enjoying letting him discover it. There are thing about them that fit perfectly and stuff that won't fit at all. But, all in all, I think they will find they won't feel whole apart anymore. ;)

Hugs dear.
jordansgrrrl
Sep. 14th, 2006 01:37 am (UTC)
Yea!!!
Alice -- I'm so estatic to see the next chapter in Dr. Adrian and Jake's story!!! I love this fic, and had nearly thought you'd given up on it.

Damn these boys are HAWT!! Jake really has it bad for Adrian too, hee. But I can't believe that Peter and Austin walked in on them. OMG, you are evil!

I hope you're having enough fun writing RPS again that the next chapter will be out right away??

Monica
brokaholic
Sep. 14th, 2006 03:23 am (UTC)
Re: Yea!!!
So Glad you liked it.

I wrote this chapter almost entirely from Jake's point of view instead of my usual style of fliping between the two. I think Jake seems very taken with Adrian, which he is. But, also remember, he just had sex with a man for the very first time. He is trilled and insecure about it. He feels the rush of power by seeing Adrian react to him, but there is an underlying, do I measure up.

I can hardly wait to get to a sex scene from Adrian's POV. Cos, I think that will be very hawt. I can assure you, Adrian has it just as Bad for Jake too.

Re: the uninspired walk in: Hell Yeah, I am evil. I needed a precipitating factor for events of my next chapter;)

Oh I Love writing RPS, no doubt about it. mostly cos I don't have to worry too much about characterization.

Cyber hugs for you Monica!
lolitaray
Sep. 14th, 2006 12:08 pm (UTC)
OMG, Alice! I'm going to have to take a shower after that...incredibly hot, Chica...yah for the smexing it up!

And the cliffhanger at the end..oh wow, what a visual for Austin and Peter...Squeee, you cannot leave us this long for the next update now. :)
I so enjoy reading your chapters, I always get something good out of them.:)

Love you so much, beautiful Brokaholic friend. *hugs*
brokaholic
Sep. 14th, 2006 05:59 pm (UTC)
Lolita, Chica! You always make me want to hug you!

Glad you liked the smexing it up. Hopefully it's all up from here ;). I am so into this right now I could crunch out the next three chapters in a heart beat (and I will), but, I have a hungry vampire that demands my attention too. Not to mention a Jack heading for the alter. And Sheera planted this insane plot bunny in my head that has been driving me insane with wanting to pop out of my head. Later for that one though.

As usual, sorry for the sloppy editing. I am hopeless, I know.

Luv U right back, my dearest Chica. xxx
merrobot
Sep. 14th, 2006 02:41 pm (UTC)
I was thrilled to see you'd updated Life in LA - I was beginning to wonder if I would ever get to find out what happened next. The wait was, however, completely worth it!! That was a great chapter and I'm on tenterhooks as to what will happen now - what a dramatic ending! Looking forward to reading more :0)
brokaholic
Sep. 14th, 2006 06:02 pm (UTC)
Hello dear,

It might take me forever(cos RL keeps getting in the way) but I will finish every single fic I ever start.

I am sooo glad you think it was worth it. Hope to have my next one out much much sooner this time. Thank you so much for sticking with it.

Hugs, Alice
(Anonymous)
Sep. 15th, 2006 05:40 pm (UTC)
Sorry to be so late with my comments Alice....as you know....RL has not been
kind the past few weeks.....but.....YOU sure brightened my day !!!

Getting caught "swallowing" by two of your friends.....hmmmm, I love it....
great creativity, only our Alice could cum up with that !!!!!

As you said earlier, now the "setup" is in place, and we will need to see
how our merry little slasher puts all these parts and pieces together.
I know you will do an EXCELLENT job!
Rob and A


amtamburo
Mar. 15th, 2007 06:54 am (UTC)
Hello there!

I certainly hope this finds you well, and that life for you has improved. I myself have had a rough few months, but things are looking up for me.

I was wondering if you had any plans to finish this story. As you know, I love it greatly, and I would so love to see it completed.

Hope all is well... keep in touch.

Angi
eclectic_spirit
Sep. 17th, 2007 04:37 pm (UTC)
From a new reader...
Hi there -
I've just finished reading through this whole story this morning, and wanted to tell you how much I've loved it. This is one of the most fabulous Jake slash stories I've ever read, and I have read a lot.
Please tell me, do you still intend to take it further, or have you left it behind for other fics?

All my best,
Mark

P.S. By the way, I'm a new member over at DC; my screenname is Haunted_by_Jake if you want to look me up.
brokaholic
Sep. 19th, 2007 10:08 pm (UTC)
Re: From a new reader...
Hello Mark,

So you join the ranks of Gyllenhaalics :-)

I am honored you think so highly of my story. Actually a friend of mine read it and considered it fluff (which I understand to be a backhanded way of saying it sucks)

Anyway, I am actually planning on finishing the series. I have 2 other stories Ennis/Jack stories that I am writing too. I got caught up studying for my Medical Boards so I had to take a haitus, but when I post them It'll be all remaining chapters.

My e-mail is brokaholic06ATyahooDOTcom. If you drop me a few lines, I'll send you line when I update them.

Hugs and Kisses from a Brokaholic friend
amtamburo
Oct. 24th, 2007 08:24 am (UTC)
OMG!! ~does happy dance~
Please oh please tell me that I am not dreaming!! I have missed this story so much! Just the thought that you might continue with it makes me SO happy! Please Please Please drop me a line and let me know how you have been! angi_meets_worldATyahoo.com

I would be so thrilled to hear from you... and I am so sorry that it has taken me so long to notice this, my computer died and I just a few days ago was able to return.

Best Wishes,

Angi
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